Is Your College Essay Good Enough? Here’s 12 Tips

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Your college application essay can be the ticket to the college of your choice.

The essay gives you a chance to differentiate yourself and highlight assets that don’t show up elsewhere on your college application. This is your chance to shine so give it the necessary time to make it the best it can be.

 

  1. Focus! You’ve got only 650 words for the essay. That’s slightly less than one single-spaced page. Cut to the chase and keep it simple. Zero in on a specific event or occasion that illustrates you learned something, gained insight, matured, or progressed in some way.
  2. Avoid chronology. You don’t have endless space. Too often, I’ve seen students write beautiful stories that start from some beginning long ago. The essay grows to 1,200 words and now the writer is in trouble, and the heart of the story must be cut. That’s painful, and the essay becomes unrecognizable to the author.
  3. Mine your brain and everyone else’s. Finding a topic that reflects something meaningful takes time and deep thought. The most effective process I’ve found for generating ideas is brainstorming. Bounce ideas off your family members and friends – seek out deep thinkers, writers, or people know you well. Each spring and summer I hold workshops for rising seniors so I can know them and help them to know themselves. We sit around a conference table and talk. You’d be amazed at the stories the students have inside them without realizing it.
  4. Use metaphors to depict life lessons. Show your readers instead of telling them. One student, who was planning to become a lawyer, started her second draft like this: “The girl on the bus was my best client. Whenever the driver reprimanded her, I would step up to her defense. That’s me, defender of the weak or the clueless.” Her first draft began like this: “In the second grade I decided that I was going to be the first women president of the United States. I wanted to be the President because I wanted to outlaw smoking, and I wanted to make shelters for black cats.”  Do you see the difference?
  5. Know your kernel of truth. This is the essence of all good essay writing. There is the outer you, and then there’s that kernel inside you from which springs your emotions, beliefs, and philosophies. The most successful essays I’ve ever written have come from a scene or occurrence that stirred emotion inside me –- an event or feeling I can’t forget. When you feel compelled to write about a topic, you have found your kernel of truth. It’s the thing that makes you tick.

    It’s the stuff that makes your friends love you.

    It’s the engine that motivates you to reach further and try harder. Pay attention to your emotions and you’ll find it.

  6. Choose a topic that truly interests you. The Common Application has five essay prompts. Decide whether you want to write a story about yourself, or whether you want to make a persuasive argument. A personal story requires less research but more creativity. A persuasive story requires a lot of thought, research and accuracy. Regardless, your story should stir passion or deep commitment in you. If it doesn’t, search for another topic. If your story doesn’t interest you, it won’t interest your readers, and you will be forgotten in the pile of applicant rejections.
  7. Just do it. There is no substitute for putting pen to paper, or fingers to keyboard. Every author will tell you that no book was ever written inside someone’s head. Writing helps you reach a deeper level of thinking. This is the area where your subconscious and conscious mind intersect, from where your best ideas gush. Like Dorothy and her red sparkly shoes, you have the means for going home, you just need someone to tell you how. Here’s how: write your first paragraph. Then write your second paragraph. Then your third and finally your fourth. Don’t worry about grammar, spelling or typographical mistakes. Don’t try to make it pretty. All of that can come later. For now, just get the story onto the page.
  8. Use action verbs. The best writers eschew (avoid) adjectives. If you do this, you’ll not only present a more vivid picture, but you’ll save space.
  9. Revise! The process of revising and editing your essay will spur insight that improves your writing. Pay attention to grammar, syntax and spelling.
  10. Don’t force the ending. Remember when I said you want to find the intersection of your conscious and subconscious mind? That’s where your best conclusions come from, so if you don’t know how to end your story, turn off your brain for a while and let things percolate. Come back to the essay a day or two later and read it through. Sometimes the perfect ending will pop into your head. You’ll know you’ve nailed it.
  11. Sculpt your essay. Now that you’ve got it in final format and you think it’s ready to submit, stop. This is when it’s time to see yourself as Michelangelo with the statue of David before you. Chisel away. Scrutinize every sentence. Are there extra words that can be eliminated without changing the meaning of the sentence? Are you using precise language? Have you chosen the best words? Are there redundancies or unnecessary words?
  12. Envision your story as a circle. Envision your essay as a story that ends where it starts and travels around the page as it unfolds. A story with a powerful conclusion often refers back to the beginning, but shows resolution and growth.

Do you have any special tips to help improve your essay writing? Please share with us and our readers in the comments and on our Facebook page, thanks!

Joyce Pellino Crane

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